Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Friday, 26 July 2019
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Ari that was a great thing that you won I did not know that
ReplyDeletefrom Molly
hi Ariella,
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you made your car get to the other side.
I would like to see a photo.
From Santara
Hi Ariella I really like your piece of writing. The only thing that I would say is that I think in my opinion I would rather it had a picture cause then it stands out more but it still looks awesome.
ReplyDelete-Eilish